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Bewafa Bar Mein

Posted by shiwuz on September 18, 2008

I know its been a while since I posted something, but it hasn’t really bean a while that I wrote something. Infact, in the 10 years that I have been writing since, the max I’ve ever taken to write any poem has been about 45 minutes… but this one, this one has taken the most time I’ve ever spent on a single poem, almost about a month.

Why? I don’t know, may be what I felt was too complicated and may be what I felt, I never felt before! And even after I took all this time to write it I don’t know if I have accomplished what I aspired to! May be you can tell me, may be you understand it more than I do… May be, who knows?!

To read the poem, please click on the image, and then click once again to zoom into it… sorry for the trouble, but I could not find a better way to lay it out…

Image courtesy: artmgallery

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15 Responses to “Bewafa Bar Mein”

  1. pranay said

    good creativity… m talkin abt the whole blog in general .. nt only thiis post… u r one of my inspirations… trust me.. u make me thnk tht i shud start wirtin again… i do write these days but wt i do i very casual n random.. unlike u whch requires a lot of thought and imaginative input.. i used to write poems too.. n i still do… juss tht its less now… i wish i cud put up my poems too but u knw.. m toooo lazy to do tht… hehe… anyways good blog.. keep postin more… n i would suggest u one thng… change the color of ur blog… make it bright n lively… its too dark… kinda depressin.. lol… trust me colors make a lot of diff… i thnk we shall talk abt tht some othr day… but once again good work and keep it up..

  2. shiwuz said

    @ Pranay:

    Neeeeee – I hope to continue being your inspiration, if not to think, atleast to write! =) and if i cant be an inspiration, take me as a threat… lol, cuz if i dont get to read that thing u r writing, uska anjaam achcha nai hoga!!

    and who else is a more poetic person than u, i know about that date of ur’s, u know which one i m talking about!! =)

    i will change it soon, let me get some free time to do it in a better way, and i assure i will change the look of my blog, if not all – atleast the color, so that u feel more welcome!

    Once again, thanks!

    cheers kar neee…

    lol, shiwanee!!

  3. Nikhil said

    Very nicely done! πŸ™‚
    When I first read the title, I thought you got drunk in a bar somewhere! Then it struck me! LOL… Good job! πŸ˜€
    Happy Diwali!!!!! πŸ˜€

  4. shiwuz said

    @ Nikhil: Loooong time! That happens too (me getting drunk somewhere)… but that certainly doesn’t come out on the blog! πŸ˜€

    Happy Diwali to you too! I’ve loads to catch up on mirrorcracked too!

  5. Desai... said

    nice one..!!

  6. shiwuz said

    @ Desai… its really hard to get a compliment from you, THANKSSSSSSSSSSS!!! πŸ™‚

  7. shiwuz said

    @Pranay:- I hope the new theme makes you feel more like it!

  8. Nikhil said

    Hey, new theme! Nice! πŸ˜€

  9. shiwuz said

    @Nik: yeah, I had to – some people thought the last one was too gloomy! (i liked it tho’)

  10. Avi said

    U r So to gooood,
    Very nice,

  11. shiwuz said

    @Avi:

    Glad you liked it! πŸ™‚

    You are welcome in my space!

    Regards,
    Shiwuz

  12. Good one. The lady in the pic scared me though!

  13. Rajesh said

    Good observations expressed in a perfect manner of the “eyes” of the lady of darkness. nice creation.

  14. shiwuz said

    Dad, this is just what I observed – if the meaning gets thru, I m happy! Although, not everyone may agree with me…

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