Mera to gum badalta rehta hai
Posted by Viral Trivedi on May 2, 2008
Ik ik saans ke saath,
Vaqt karvat badalta rehta hai..
Kuch naye rishto ke aage,
Ek purana rishta rang badalta rehta hai
Vo jo dil ko azeez hua karta tha kabhi,
Ab roz mere aage chehre badalta rehta hai
Yaari utaar ke taang di usne kapdo samet
Vo yaaro ke jazbaat badalta rehta hai
Uss rishte ki surat budhi ho gai fir bhi
Kyu vo aaine badalta rehta hai!
Yaadein to mit ne se rahi…
Zamaana badalta rehta hai
Vo raazdaar hi kya hoga
Jo humraaz badalta rehta hai
Haal-e-bayaan kar deta hoon jis se
Dil ka mahol badalta rehta hai
Chahta hoon, khud ko badal dalu
Jaise har shaks badalta rehta hai
Main gum nahi karta kisi baat par
Mera to gum badalta rehta hai
Shiwani 
shiwuz said
Bro,
should i say its depth is intriguing? tht wud b n understatement!
What else should I say, thanks millions for adding to my blog… and making it our blog! afterall, its never been u or i, its always ‘us’…
wouldn’t hurt if i mentioned again, m a big fan of ur’s!!!!!
Yaake said
Amazing use of poetic license!! I love it!!! 😀
Who’s the poet? Shiwuz or bro?
Viral Trivedi said
@ shiwuz
It’s indeed been a conscious though spontaneous urge to add to your blog… “our blog”
And of course, thanks for the positive reception of my lines…
…lOve!
shiwuz said
@ Yaake,
I am still in the queue for getting the license… such a work of art, so subtle yet so profound, has to be coming from bro… 🙂
@ Bro,
Thanks for giving me a chance of positive reception!! 🙂
Ankur Aggarwal said
wow wonderful poem.. did u write it?
Nikhil said
you’ve been inspirationally tagged… 🙂
Please consider it…
Rajesh said
Chahta hoon, khud ko badal dalu
Jaise har shaks badalta rehta hai
Main gum nahi karta kisi baat par
Mera to gum badalta rehta hai
A beautifulllllllll bunch of thoughts and these are the beautiful lines among them… Cheer up n take care. Luv
shiwuz said
@Ankur:
Hi Ankur, thanks for stopping by. My brother actually wrote the poem, and yeah, i loved it too!
@Nikhil,
I have considered it… infact, i have posted it too, not sure upto what extent its appropriate!
shiwuz said
@ Rajesh,
Dad, all the lines of it are so beautiful… so simple yet so deep…
Raj said
hey its great, its cool like a life.
Chahta hoon, khud ko badal dalu
Jaise har shaks badalta rehta hai
its a wonderful line.
shiwuz said
@ Raj,
Raj, Welcome to my little world… I am glad you liked it… Visit more often… And please offer your active criticism, I will be pleased to receive it…
Cheers!
Sonica said
Hi Guys,
It’s been long long time… Now i found ya both here. Lovely writings.
Miss ya all so much.
Cheers mate,
Sonica.
shiwuz said
@Sonica:
Soniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii! OMG!! I am speechless, its sooooooo good to hear from you, you know its been such a long time, and I had no trace of you- I am happy I blog now, that you found me here!! And m sure, Viral will be too!!
Viral wrote this one on my blog, but he has his own blog going on, much better than mine, lol! 🙂 its viraltrivedi.wordpress.com
Anyways, I’ve emailed you more, dont wanna write an essay here!
Miss ya loads too!!
Cheers (Samiya)! 😀
Shiwani
Viral Trivedi said
Sonica,
Heeeeey, good to trace you (wink).. (oops..) rather good to be traced by you… wow, it feels so undefinable to find someone back, someone whom you never thought could turn up like this… And that someone whom you didn’t even get a chance to say a bye to… didnt even realize when you got lost from each others’ reach. Feels really euphoric!
anyways, let me not be so very generous of more lines against your just 2 lines of message here above. Lolz.
how r u? how have you been? where are you? what ‘re you upto, lady?
.. pEace!